Gil Alexander

Hey, thanks for your review, it's been very helpful. ;D

A speculative fiction story. It is saturated with metaphors, tell me what you think I was trying to say. And constructive criticism, please! :D "Grape Juice and the Clan from ...

This conveys one of the best images of beauty and calmness I've read in a very long while. A very, very nice piece!

This is an amazing poem. Just amazing. You used great figurative language with good precise rythm... my favorite stanza is the first: I see you curling in the smoky aftertaste ...

Hey, thanks zell. :D

Hey, I'm Gil. I'm a newbie and I like to write. All of those things you probably already knew. Oh well.